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PostSubject: My Ability   Sun May 02, 2010 4:47 am

Name: Kuro Honoo

Rank: D-S

What stat does it utilize: Magic

History: When Uvaras was young, he was forced to learn flames from his father. After his father and the rest of his family was killed except his sister. His sister and himself was taken into someones family. Eventually, the family's son and cousin always bully Uvaras. Uvaras was afraid of them but one day, he accidentally snapped his fingers. Small lightning line came out and it just traveled for a while and it disappeared. Afterward, dark flames would come out and as it touched the children it was burning them. It damaged the children a lot but Uvaras used a lot of power which made him to exhaustion. He was then taken to the hospital to rest. That was the day when he gained his power. (If you see Full Metal Alchemist before then you'll know the power *I customize a bit >.>)

What does it do: When Uvaras snapped his fingers (any fingers) a small lightning line would come out then disappeared. Afterward, dark flames would come out from Uvaras and once touched anything, it would burn them. The dark flames would go to anyone Uvaras wanted to hit. He could also just snapped his fingers and caused an explosion to where the enemy was standing or any body parts.
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Rank:
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D Rank: Cause a small dark fire explosion to where he wanted to hit.

C Rank: Able to allow Uvaras to cause the small lightning line. Only travel a few centimeters then dark flames would come out and burn anything around it. (Chase after anyone he wanted to hit)

B Rank: Allow Uvaras to cause a medium damage dark flame fire explosion where the opponent was standing..

A Rank: Allow Uvaras to manipulate dark flames he made into weapons.

S Rank: Causes a dark fire explosion to where the enemy was standing , could also hit body parts where Uvaras wanted and manipulate flames to dark flames.

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Abilities: D Rank
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Attack Name: (None)(Basic technique)

Rank: D

What stat does it utilize: Magic

Ability Strength Cost: 130 Ability Strength

What does it do: (Snapped his fingers) Cause a small dark fire explosion to where he wanted to hit (Where enemy standing or its body parts). *Damage - 140% Of Magic*
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C Rank
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Attack Name: Kuro Honoo

Rank: C

What stat does it utilize: Magic

Ability Strength Cost: 330 Ability Strength

What does it do:(Snapped his fingers) Able to allow Uvaras to cause the small lightning line. Only travel a few centimeters then dark flames would come out in front of whichever hand he uses its fingers to snap and burn anything around it. (Chase after anyone he wanted to hit). *Damage - 170% Of Magic*
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B Rank
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Attack Name: (None)(B rank of D Rank Basic Technique)

Rank: B

What stat does it utilize: Magic

Ability Strength Cost: 1, 500

What does it do:(Snapped his fingers) Allow Uvaras to cause a medium damage dark flame fire explosion where the opponent was standing and any body parts. *Damage - 200% Of Magic*
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A Rank
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Attack Name: Hisaki Adauchi

Rank: A

What stat does it utilize: Magic

Ability Strength Cost: 700 Ability Strength

What does it do: Makes any weapons in dark flames. (Sword: Covered with dark falmes, Guns: The bullets were covered with dark flames). *Damage boost on weapons damage - 25% Of Magic*
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S Rank
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Attack Name: (None)(S rank of D Rank Basic Technique)

Rank: S

What stat does it utilize: Magic

Ability Strength Cost: 8,600

What does it do: (Snapped his fingers) Causes the strongest dark flames explosion to where the enemy was standing , could also hit body parts where Uvaras wanted. *Damage - 300% of magic and 300% of defense *
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S Rank
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Attack Name: Adauchi Doragon

Rank: S

What stat does it utilize: Magic

Ability Strength Cost: 6,600

What does it do: (Snapped his fingers) A small lightning comes out and once it disappeared. A dark flame dragon would come out in front of Uvaras and chased after anyone Uvaras wanted. *Damage - 255% of magic*

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S Rank
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Attack Name: Adauchi Kuro Honoo (Strongest level of the C rank Technique)

Rank: S

What stat does it utilize: Magic

Ability Strength Cost: 7,000

What does it do: (Snapped his fingers) Able to allow Uvaras to cause the small lightning line. Only travel a few centimeters then dark flames would come out in front of whichever hand he uses its fingers to snap and burn anything around it. (Chase after anyone he wanted to hit). *Damage - 300% Of Magic*


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PostSubject: Re: My Ability   Sun May 02, 2010 10:02 pm

Please list your damages and AS costs. We aren't here to create stuff for you. I know since the site is new it is semi difficult to get a grasp on things... But please do your best. If something is overpowered we will tell you and say what you need to fix. Also please resize your avatar. It is too big. If you have windows 7 go into paint. Open the picture and resize it.

If you need an example look around at other people's attacks and such. It will help you get a better feel. If that doesn't work, wait till Friday when I do updates. I am going to be putting up a small explanation for what is reasonable and what isn't.
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PostSubject: Re: My Ability   Mon May 03, 2010 4:22 am

Updated @@, decrease damage and increase strength usage for some of them. *Adds higher damage because I don't have much of abilities. *All offensive none are defensive*
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PostSubject: Re: My Ability   Mon May 03, 2010 7:12 am

Your S rank attacks need to be lowered. Because the damage is too high for a single stat. Meaning it is easy to power mod it. Cause 1,000 magic can do 6,900 damage. That is power mod. Same with your other ones. I will allow maybe 400% damage max for a single stat attack. I will only allow it with one attack as well. The other two S must be below 300%. Ability strength can be lowered for the other two. While I expect the one with 400% to be upped.


Also, thanks for fixing your avatar.
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PostSubject: Re: My Ability   Mon May 03, 2010 7:54 am

You are really pushing the boundaries aren't you? Again your three S ranks are completely Over Powered. I may limit it to one ultimate attack is what I am saying. Yet I see more like three ultimate attacks. Please choose ONE and make the other two extremely weaker or a great deal weaker.
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PostSubject: Re: My Ability   Mon May 03, 2010 4:18 pm

Sorry, >.> I'm just wondering what would happen.
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PostSubject: Re: My Ability   Mon May 03, 2010 5:12 pm

Please take this seriously. It feels like you aren't.
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PostSubject: Re: My Ability   Tue May 04, 2010 3:36 am

Fine, >.> well done updated, I did it properly. PS: I did a typo making it 2600% =='' sorry about that.
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PostSubject: Re: My Ability   Wed May 05, 2010 10:47 am

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